Monday, June 21, 2010

MORTAL LIFE

Insomniac, staring at ceiling, life moves.
Darkness outside will end as dawn crawls.
No end to running, cash for pumped up lies.
Lonely introspection's, all rights and wrongs.
Alas !!! these sorrows don't accept bribes.

Competing no containment in these eyes. 
Greed, can make grave hollow, twice.
Crucifying creator and all shame of sins. 
Alas !!! these sorrows don't accept bribes.

Better united, are those brainless dogs.
Hypocrisy propagated in name of lords.
Humanity suffers under prescript minds. 
Alas !!! these sorrows don't accept bribes.

Wipe a tear its worth billion smiles. 
A selfless meaning beyond all signs.
Remember sorrows don't accept bribes.
Find a giving paradise, in this mortal life.

10 comments:

  1. "Alas!!! these sorrows don’t accept bribes"

    Liked it.

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  2. Very nicely written! I enjoyed every line! Thanks for sharing!

    -Weasel

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  3. Very nice work. Powerful images....



    Melanie

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  4. very true... wish they accepted bribes though :) lovely poem..

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  5. @all - glad you liked this - keep visiting

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  6. Loved this line:

    Alas!!! these sorrows don’t accept bribes

    An amazing piece of work...yet again.Brilliant!

    Keep inking :)

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  7. @poornima :) glad you liked it - keep visiting

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  8. a cache or cash of pumped up lies? like "these sorrows don’t accept bribes," v. nice.

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  9. ^ thanks for pointing out - made the change - keep visiting :)

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